I came across the advertisement on Facebook? Is it written correctly?

Update:

 Could you please precisely point out the mistakes?

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  • 4 weeks ago
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    Why not be honest and ask us to review your ad you want to place? I think there should be a semicolon before therefore instead of a comma. 

    I disagree with the other poster and don't think punctuation errors have much to do with teaching people read a speak a new language.

  • Anonymous
    4 weeks ago

    I see a comma mistake. That means this person isn't all that good at English, IMO.

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