Which sentence is better?
A. Then he left, his laptop and laser pointer in his hand.
B. Then he left, laptop and laser pointer in his hand.
- rodcomLv 62 months agoFavourite answer
Either works. The second sentence is the same as the first with the word "his" being implied by the context of the sentence.
- Anonymous2 months ago
C. Then he left, with his laptop and laser pointer in hand.
- bluebellbkkLv 72 months ago
They are both correct, but the one that doesn't unnecessarily repeat "his" reads better.
- SathiLv 72 months ago
...laptop and laser pointer in hand.
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- 2 months ago
A. Subject = His.