Are my lyrics good?

I'm 14, in a band of 4, and the song is an alternative/Pop Punk/Emo song. This song is about a past friend who had a crush on me, yet continuously ****** with my anxiety, would consistently lie to me, and would use emotions to try to be in the right. This song is called "All Downhill From Here", Here it is!

You’re hiding something, ‘cause it’s burning through your eyes

I try to get it out, but all I hear from you are lies

[Pre-Chorus:]

And I can tell you’re going through the motions

I figured you were acting out your part

Once again, we’re playing off emotion

Which one of us will burn until the end?

[Chorus:]

Catalyst, you insist to pull me down

You contradict the fact that you still want me around

And it’s all downhill from here

And it’s all downhill from here

Your good intentions slowly turn to bitterness

Reoccurring episodes with each and every kiss

(Let’s go!)

[Pre-Chorus]

[Chorus]

And I can’t believe you pulled it off again

Or notice till it all sets in

You’ll deny it ‘til you’re at your bitter end

[Pre-Chorus]

[Chorus]

And you keep pulling me down!

(pulling me down)

(pulling me down)

You contradict the fact that you still want me around

And it’s all downhill from here

And it’s all downhill from here

 

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  • 2 months ago

    Actually, it sounds pretty good to me.  Better than a lot of the crap that gets major attention.

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