abanti asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 5 months ago

What about my poem.. A New Sunshine..?

A New Sunshine...

Even now morning is not over,

The hope for a new sunshine is not lost,

The door of darkness is not so strong,

That it would bar the new dawn!

This journey is not over for us,

Yet not ended the history of our red drops

 Never and never..

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  • 4 months ago

    Even now the morning is not over,

    the hope for a new ray of sunshine is not lost,

    the door of darkness is not so strong.

    That it would bar the new dawn!

    This journey is not over for us,

    yet not ended the history of our red drops <--- I don't really get what you mean? Maybe elaborate with the 'blood symbolism'...like add another line?

     Never and never..

  • Anonymous
    4 months ago

    What you've written here ^^ isn't worth spit.

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