abanti asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 3 months ago

THE DARK FIRE...... what about the poem?

THE DARK FIRE .

Every moment was a darkness,

the dark darkness,

It was his nature to surround everything,

It wasn't just a darkness,

It could just be a rare one,

Updating time,

It is connected with the fire,

Everything was in danger,

This was the truth,

It was real,

I knew

I crossed the fire

I overtook the darkness,

The reason was my belief,

and my aim to cross all the bars..

2 Answers

Relevance
  • 3 months ago

    Maybe title it 

    The Deep Sleep

    Beyond every moment

    was darkness,

    Like rain that watered the earth

    the  darkness feel upon him

    It was his nature to consume 

    It wasn't just darkness,

    It could just be updating time,

    corrected by fire,

    Overthrown by danger,

    This was the truth,

    It was real,

    He knew

    He crossed the fire

    He was overtook with darkness,

    The reason must be

    his belief,

    and his aim to cross all 

    Opposition

  • Anonymous
    3 months ago

    It needs a car chase and some explosions before I'd watch it.

Still have questions? Get answers by asking now.