Please  help me correct the words in bracket  ...replace them by using punctuation and words.?

Now consider( this the )students brings their school book,electronic or otherwise,and a notebook or table/laptop with them to the(kids)practice. While the children are at their respective practices,the students can (read take notes and) start preparing for their work through outlining and/or drafting. Even if the sports park dosen't have an internet connection,the students can have a printed copy of (there) school work with them to refer to.if practice runs late the student simply gets a little more work done.then,when the car (brakes) down,its not so kuch of an impact.

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  • 1 month ago

    Now consider this: Students bring their school book,electronic or otherwise,and a notebook or table/laptop with them to the practice session. While the children are at their respective practices, they can read and take notes, and start preparing for their work through outlining and/or drafting. Whilst the Sports Park lacks an internet connection, the students can still have a printed copy of their school work with them for reference. In the event of the practice session running late, or the car breaks down, the student simply gets a an opportunity to get little more work done.

    NB: I don't understand the context of the car breaking down. Are they learning about cars? Are they scheduled to be collected in a car that might break down? If not, then mentioning the car breaking down can be omitted.

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  • RP
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    1 month ago

    This has many errors beyond the words in parentheses. Here is a revision: Now consider this. Students bring their books, electronic or otherwise, and notebooks or table/laptops with them to practice. While attending practice, the students can review notes and prepare for school work by outlining and/or drafting. Even if the sports park lacks internet connectivity, students can have a printed copy of their school work for reference. If practice runs late, students get more work done and, if the car breaks down, the impact is lessened.

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