A DEEP SILENCE......?
it reminds me of the feelings of spring,
a story of the love of a soft wind,
i was awake,
over all silence,
i feel the emotions,
when i reach on the moment......
i indicate the colours,
all come the same way,
the green grass,
that dry leaves,
showed me a deep silence,
with a dropless tears.....
- Lapiz DominoesLv 74 hours ago
Memory is a great thing
and one thing to surpass as well.
This is a neatly penned softly. softly, contemplative - to - me, reminder..Thanks.
- 2 weeks ago
This poem is nice, I like this poem.
- Anonymous2 months ago
Does this poem have a meaning?
It seems you are trying to sound deep without giving any actual substance.
- VoelvenLv 72 months ago
I think you should move this to the 'Poetry" section.
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- HernandoLv 62 months ago
Wouldst I was a cater-piggle / Creepy-crawly waggle wiggle.Source(s): Walt Kelly
- CogitoLv 72 months ago
What is that supposed to mean? Why are you asking in Books & Authors?