Seeking constructive feedback on poetry?

I wrote a poetry about the subjects of sexism and bigotry and I’m seeking feedback. I’m feeling unsure. I want to make sure that others will see it in a positive light, because I’m sharing it with a wider audience. The poems are attached in a link below written as a draft. Thank... show more I wrote a poetry about the subjects of sexism and bigotry and I’m seeking feedback. I’m feeling unsure. I want to make sure that others will see it in a positive light, because I’m sharing it with a wider audience. The poems are attached in a link below written as a draft. Thank you.

https://ilovedogs1997.tumblr.com/post/187623636963/in-a-box-poem-draft

https://ilovedogs1997.tumblr.com/post/187623649578/stand-up-against-the-hate-poem-draft
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