A poem, tell me, did you know the ending?
Butterflies hold back
loose wisps of her hair
as cupped hands
who eagerly drink
sweet nectar she
Her smile ushers out
the shy, hiding critters,
her song's a soft breeze,
trees dance in response.
Doves lift up her skirts
as her feet touch
in pure joy at
the sight she beholds,
she always imagined
a place just like this
when heaven became
her new home.
(Kind friends have asked me to stop in now and again,
I figure a poem a month won't hurt! Thank you.)
- BlueFeatherLv 69 years agoFavourite answer
Bippity Boppity Boo!
Scenes from the classic Disney animations Cinderella and Snow White went dancing through my head as I read that. What a delightful picture you paint!
Happy to see you back, Ma.
- Country GirlLv 79 years ago
Nice to see you Sue.. The poem gives a lovely image, and one day we will see what our eyes could not fully see here on earth. We will experience in fullness the true ending won't we?! I know it will be one that is filled with joy and many surprises.
- shirleyfLv 69 years ago
The ending was an unexpected surprise for me. Very lovely and angelic!
Nice seeing you, Sue. Hope all is well with you.Source(s): Shirley.
- DeeZire♥Lv 79 years ago
oh Sue...I am soooo happy to see another poem
written by you, and what a beautiful poem it is♥
It sounds like pure heaven indeed....So happy
you decided to let us here read your newest~
it's great to see you once again....and happy
you did not forget about so many who love u!
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- Kitty 2Lv 79 years ago
Wonderful poem Sue..sounds heavenly..K2
- CamiLv 79 years ago
Enchanting...love it. Sue, you may as well give up trying to stay away from here, it's in your blood and heart and I don't think that is a bad thing. Gooood to see you again!
- GeminisingerLv 69 years ago
I figured out the ending before I got there,Ma,because it sounded like a heavenly place.Missed you.
- Anonymous9 years ago
Very glad to see you. Hope things are coming along....have thought of you often.
This poem is certainly a product of hope. Yes, Hope. It is beautiful to read and inspirational to my soul.
Bless you, Sue, and please stop in from time to time.
- Caz :) xLv 79 years ago
How do you get to this place in your poem? , where is this place, where your feet touch the ground?
Why weren't we told about it ? welcome home Hugs x
Great poetry ma
- Anonymous9 years ago
I didn't know the ending but I was distracted by carrot cake so it's not my fault.