I just wrote this poem this morning and was wondering if it's good. It's just a for fun poem.?

The Wren

A little wren looked in at me.

I guess he wondered who I could be.

I looked back with a little grin

and wondered where this wren had been.

He gave a chirp and ruffled his wings.

It's a song I've heard whenever he sings.

From the cold of snow to spring anew,

he bobbed his tiny head

and bid me ado.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I have been answering a bunch of poem critiques this morning and this is the best one so far! I love the last line. You have great vocabulary and a creative original yet perfect title. keep writing!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Aww, that is so good! I love your rhyming choices, their great! You defintely have lots of talent, that i can see. Do you mind looking at mine?

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=201002...

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Cute! Its good. :)

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