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gmirp asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

" I AM VIRUS " a new poem.......I dare u to open me?


I move in the shadows

Unseen by n***ed-eyes

My M.O. is destruction

I have ruined many lives

Your lack of preparation

and willingness to learn

Is an open pathway

My invitation to return

Your defenses I disable

one by one by one

Try to stop me, if your able

Contamination has begun

Undetected I'll prevail

While you go about your lives

You never saw me coming

I seemed harmless in disguise

Your firewalls are useless

you are putty in my hands

I'll have you do my grunt work

as you "Forward"... I'll expand.

Your inbox is my window

to pentetrate your life inside

I AM VIRUS and I am out there

There is nowhere you can hide.

5 Answers

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favourite answer

    I like it.


  • 1 decade ago

    It's beutiful. And if it were in a shop.... I would buy it.

    I suggest you make yourself more herd. I recomend you get like a myspace, and post it in a blog there.

    You are an inspiration to all of us =)

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Haha, good job. I have to say I was expecting some sort of angsty poem from the title.

    One thing that stuck out "Try to stop me, if your able" should be "Try to stop me, if you're able"

  • 1 decade ago

    VERY good!!

    I have met this virus before and it ate my hard drive.. Nasty little thing.. LOL..

    Peace and God bless from Texas <><

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  • Dondi
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    cute one, have another star.

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