"Embrace" a new poem....can you feel it?
The warmth of your tender touch
Love exchange moment that means so much
Eyes closed.. heart open
Arms clung tight
Time standing still
as we embrace with our might
no need for words
or to gaze in each others eyes
One honest embrace tell's all
without pre-concieved lies
I wrote this just a few moments ago...
I closed my eyes and and remembered one such embrace....I typed as the image flooded my mind...and I relived it again. I am glad that you could feel it too!
- 1 decade agoFavourite answer
I see I might have been a little too harsh in my initial answer
I think your wording is good but this is just not the type of poem I am into . Hope that better explains , I don't want to hurt anyone's feelings with my answers
- cade LLv 41 decade ago
great job G
i really enjoyed how you convey a significant aspect of love/relationships which is the 'ability to trust and appreciate your significant other through emotions then to actually discuss and presume' with such pristine eloquence and accuracy through your vivid descriptions. The imagery generated in this poem was so captivitating and lively =)
I felt the same flooding sensation you felt. Your manipulation of words to make them play a song in concise harmony with your minds is an exceptional attribute and i commend you on this poem.
I liked the poem alot. Your use of language was another solid feature and the range of connotations of more simplistic words used are great because these help add to the feel of the poem.
Even though it was quite short, the span of the poem didn't compensate for the superlative quality.
well done on such a great poem.
- The Black KnightLv 51 decade ago
i really enjoyed it
it brings back some painful memories
the power of a loved ones embrace can be the best thing in the world
but after they are gone all that is left is pain
I'm sorry it's so beautiful that reminds me of brighter days
- See how they runLv 51 decade ago
I love it G! I just had a hug from a loved one the other day and it was so good! Hugs are the neatest thing since peanut butter and jelly-Ha!
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- DondiLv 71 decade ago
This is an amazing short poem. Very touching without being touchy-feely. I enjoyed it.
- 1 decade ago
im still processing your greatness
that was AWESOME !!
whoever wrote this has certain talent. i can just imagine the setting and the situation.
i thank you for posting this poem as it has made me reconsider something big in my life.
- poeLv 51 decade ago
A very well put together "feeling" poem. Everyone can relate. Thank you.Source(s): (((HUGS)))
- 1 decade ago
very nice my friend...i haven't read one of yours in a while....i could not feel the embrace for i have never felt it before....hopefully one day i will...