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gmirp asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

"A new beginning" I haiku..what say u?

A NEW BEGINNGING

A NEW BEGINNING

I TOIL TO SHED MY OLD SKIN

LEAVING IT BEHIND...I'M FREE

Update:

Thank you all for your comments..

The picture of a snake was intentional.

Face Less.....you are correct ...I was writing about trying to shed away my old self to emerge new again free from past entanglements....

I see my old self as an outter layer of or a burial clothes or "snakeskin"

This keeps me from becoming who I am supposed to be...

with much labor and great effort , I tear away from the old and leave it behind. once discarded it can never hinder me again, It no longer has me bound.

I am finally free.....

i have a my new beginning.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    That is a very sophisticated Haiku.

    Very well done G-Lo. You are very talented..

    Great Job Hope you make more for me to read.

  • 1 decade ago

    This is beautiful.

    You are one of a kind, and usually all humans are the same to me, so this i s a compliment..

    You've no idea how much this reminds me of a person getting a new beginning, which is what i think you mean, like someone changing, making themseves better, or just starting anew...

    i love it...

    simply beautiful..

  • 1 decade ago

    I'm sorry but you got too much talent to write some thing this short

    and you could be talking about a butterfly

  • 1 decade ago

    I liked it a lot and it's nice

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  • 1 decade ago

    sounds like a snake.

    loove it!

    Source(s): sucker for poetry=]
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