"A new beginning" I haiku..what say u?
A NEW BEGINNGING
A NEW BEGINNING
I TOIL TO SHED MY OLD SKIN
LEAVING IT BEHIND...I'M FREE
Thank you all for your comments..
The picture of a snake was intentional.
Face Less.....you are correct ...I was writing about trying to shed away my old self to emerge new again free from past entanglements....
I see my old self as an outter layer of or a burial clothes or "snakeskin"
This keeps me from becoming who I am supposed to be...
with much labor and great effort , I tear away from the old and leave it behind. once discarded it can never hinder me again, It no longer has me bound.
I am finally free.....
i have a my new beginning.
- 1 decade agoFavourite answer
That is a very sophisticated Haiku.
Very well done G-Lo. You are very talented..
Great Job Hope you make more for me to read.
- FaceLessLv 51 decade ago
This is beautiful.
You are one of a kind, and usually all humans are the same to me, so this i s a compliment..
You've no idea how much this reminds me of a person getting a new beginning, which is what i think you mean, like someone changing, making themseves better, or just starting anew...
i love it...
- The Black KnightLv 51 decade ago
I'm sorry but you got too much talent to write some thing this short
and you could be talking about a butterfly
- Dark Angel 1Lv 71 decade ago
I liked it a lot and it's nice
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- 1 decade ago
sounds like a snake.
loove it!Source(s): sucker for poetry=]