gmirp
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gmirp asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

"Wild Eyes" a poem ...do u like?

Wild Eyes

by gep

Raven hair, wild eyes

Red lips and wicked lies

Cheap thrills in the dark

Wild eyes with wild spark

Sinful Betty evil soul

Gaze too long she'll gain control

Look away before you see

these wild eyes

belong to me

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favourite answer

    Oh, that i could look into those wild eyes

    And see reflected

    My desires.

    The raven hair

    the red lips

    The sensual feel of fingertips

    No evil soul

    No cheap thrill

    The heart that's beating

    will not still

    So you look deep

    and you will see

    Those wild eyes

    as well

    Belong to me.

    Cheers,'g' i haven't been on for awhile, but couldn't help responding to your poem in kind, hope you don't mind.

    xoxoxoxoxox

  • Anonymous
    4 years ago

    Emily Dickinson always has a depth in her poetry and although this seems like a throwing 'caution to the wind' or just being 'free' I think that the poem talking about having intimate relations with the one the speaker is thinking of, but it is not possible. If it were possible nothing could stop it (not wind)-they would be going into uncharted territory (done w/ the compass, chart)-and it would be wonderful (rowing in 'paradise').

  • 1 decade ago

    I liked it.

    Feels like a self realization at the end wih regret of the past.

  • poe
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    Very good, it has a catchy rhythm to it, that carries you right along! Short enough to keep you interested, but long enough to get the point across. You have a thing about eyes don't you?! JK hehe. Thanks for sharing.

    Source(s): Published poet
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  • 1 decade ago

    Oooo, very nice girl. I like the depth. That is a fun one...Keep them coming!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I actually like it. It's pretty simple, and I'll be honest, not in the deep descriptive style I like. Still. Not bad.

  • 1 decade ago

    I loved that poem! Its been a while since I heard a poem that good.

  • Dondi
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Gaze into my eyes, take me into your evil realm. I like it.

  • Zouk
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    badass! haha

    That is a swell poem and it totally reminded me of someone I know.

  • 1 decade ago

    lol..this can me a chorus to a song....the way it flows? so cool! i really like this one!

    Source(s): me and my crazy animal imitations! lol
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