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Sad poems =my bad poem (my title) lol Hey I sat on my couch today, Trying to figure out a way, To write as good as you, I thought of many ideas, But they all went off my page, Because they couldnt compare, With the beauty and the flare, That you generate, In every poem that you create, My poems were too... show more Sad poems =my bad poem (my title) lol

Hey I sat on my couch today,
Trying to figure out a way,
To write as good as you,
I thought of many ideas,
But they all went off my page,
Because they couldnt compare,
With the beauty and the flare,
That you generate,
In every poem that you create,
My poems were too sappy,
About being happy,
Love and how great it is,
How life is full of bliss,
I have to say you got me beat,
I just cant compete,
With your beautiful sad poems,
Because I dont have any of my own,
This poem may be very bad,
But I am very sad,
Because I can never write the way you do,
Thats why you are so cool,
Just know that I think your sad poems rule
Update: This is dedicated to "YOU SALENE (WeNdY)"!
your POEMS really do ROCK! LOL!
ur FRIEND!!
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