How do you like my poem?
Not the same
Poems are never the same
Once they are shared with someone
No longer a closed door with a dangling key
Tempting them to its endless possibilities
But once opened
It’s never quite the same again
It’s beauty has been beheld
And now it lies on the ground,
Unless its maker breathes new life into it again
And it can soar like it did before
Free and unchained
dont you ever feel that if you show someone a poem that you wrote, its just not as special anymore?
dd, you couldn't have said it any better. it does feel like you gave away something that should be kept secret! i luv how u sed that
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavourite answer
yeah. i feel that way too. so when we let others read our poems, we feel like we give away a secret intimate part of ourselves. and that's why it doesn't seem that special anymore, after has been read. because it's someone else's too. it's not just ours.Source(s): personal experience
- Sh00ting_St@r!Lv 41 decade ago
I agree w/dd 100% LOL! tHaTs CoRrEcT! Anyway I do feel that way when I read my poems to people they are no longer new they r yesterdays news. its no longer personal anymore.
I loved the poem. KeEp W* r* I *t*T* i *N* g*!!!
- TD Euwaite?Lv 61 decade ago
You are a writer, no 2B about it. This is very good. The next steps are Great Writer and Professional Writer...
- 1 decade ago
Hmm...... very interesting.I sort of feel the same way. :-)
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- zestful12Lv 41 decade ago